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May 07, 2006
Marionette
This is not
right. This is supposed to be
poetic -- melodic at least, if not
profoundly so.
This should be
rife with meaning, or
sensical, if nothing
else. Has the puppeteer dropped
the strings, be
it out of disinterest
or spite? I search
for a white flag
but find only chutes
and ladders.
Posted by Megan at May 7, 2006 10:26 PM
Comments
I have a degree in English and I don't have much of a clue at all about poetry. Bravo. My gut tells me that this one is good, so I'll go with that. Oh, and the fact that you wrote it is like a stamp promising a quality product, right? :)
Posted by: Kristin at May 13, 2006 12:43 AM